he told her: i like how you put your hands on your waist and tip your hips to accentuate the precious curve of your back and say 'come to bed.' i like how you walk up the stairs on the tips of your toes like you're prepared to take off in flight but possibly never come back i like how you believe in luck and running between the raindrops and leaping through open doorways and singing to the flowers i like how you brush your hair in the dim lit morning and tell me of all your last-night whimsical dreams i like how you bite your cherry lips and your fingernails and tongue and how you sit with knees crossed and bare foot bobbing up and down but i love you the most when you keep coming back to tell me that you like how i look at you |
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this was a difficult perspective. it's written from a guy's point of view to the chic he loves. although i pulled a couple details of myself into it, unintentionally. but i wont go and point them out.
 and again, i wrote this at 3 am on my cell phone. it seems to be where/when i write my best poetry. x3 hope you like it. |
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When they are trying to chase you out of town, jump infront of them, start marching, and act like it's a parade.
-- Mark Twain
I don't write anything on my cellphone unless I have to because I am terrible at texting. >.< This came out good (and I try to write from the other gender's point of view often too, and I wonder "Did I do that right? Would a girl like her really say that?" and so on. xD )
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愛の落下雨
ai no rakka u...
Utilitarianism: A doctrine where the end consequence of an action should result in the most happiness over the least pain... I am a utilitarian.
xxx.
and thanks. ^^
And no problem. ^.^
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愛の落下雨
ai no rakka u...
Utilitarianism: A doctrine where the end consequence of an action should result in the most happiness over the least pain... I am a utilitarian.
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