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he is green. naive.
he has a sweet childish face
and i just want to trace all the smooth edges
and smudge his smell onto my fingers.

he has a laughing heart
and a light that shines out of his eyes like
a flashing green light. go go go.
live live live.

he sucks in the smell after it rains
like he can’t get enough.
filling up every empty space of his lungs.
and i wish it was me he craved.

he waves his hands when he talks
like the air is something to feel with every nerve.
he says you can look at the sun through your eyelids
and it turns them into a warm place where only you can go.
i’ve tried it and it’s true.

he is always out there. he is always standing back.
he watches the world spin. he learns the dance and joins in.
he doesn’t know that i watch him. face pressed against the glass.

but he holds my hand when he finds somewhere to run.
he pulls me with and never explains.
he says life is adventure and adventure is surprise.
so he tries to be spontaneous. but i tell him he doesn’t have to try.
cause i can never keep up anyway.

he is untouched by the world. he lives in his own time.
and it makes me feel a little lost when i’m with him.
it makes me feel almost as carefree as him.

he says music is the sound of emotions
and i tell him that i’m hearing cheesy love songs
and my hearts skips a beat
cause he just laughs and says
“then so am i.”
©2009 *Zaratops
:iconzaratops:

Author's Comments

i love this boy. <33

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:icongrandomegabosses:
I love this! This is amazing. I love the part where you say he waves his hands when he talks like the air is something to feel with every nerve. Very captivating. :)

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...the longer
we're together,
the more the awkwardness
fades
disappears.
And is replaced
by simple,
pure,
passionate,
love.

--gsagoaliegurl77
:icongrandomegabosses:
no problem :)

i know the ecstasy of love. i'm in love too :)

--
...the longer
we're together,
the more the awkwardness
fades
disappears.
And is replaced
by simple,
pure,
passionate,
love.

--gsagoaliegurl77
:iconlynn90:
This is just beautiful!
:iconsimplysamwise:
wow. you are just such a good writer.
I think someone earlier said captivating, and that's a great word to describe this.
it might be one of my favorites of yours. =]
great, superb, WONDERFUL job!
:heart:

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:icontheleavesofmemory:
This is lovely :heart:

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:iconfloyt1313:
"he sucks in the smell after it rains
like he can’t get enough.
filling up every empty space of his lungs.
and i wish it was me he craved."
this is a wonderful wording...blown away...
:iconladyundone:
beautiful! :heart:

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"Blessed the hearts which can bend, for those shall never be broken."
Albert Camus
:iconevryrosehasitsthorns:
Very beautiful! ^.^ I captures a nice essence of life.

--
愛の落下雨
ai no rakka u...

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